Please look at APA style for title page. There are a few issues here.

Comparison Between NFL and NBA Global Marketing Strategies

Aaron Rodriguez

Ent MKT 4330

February 17, 2019

Professor Akopian

Football Globalization Journey This should be Introduction.

spaceThe game of football started in Canada and the United States in the 1800’s. In the 1930’s Japan football had been introduced to Japan. In these early stages football was still small globally but in the 1970’s is when there was a real start for the push of football on the global stage and huge surge in the 1980’s. In 1999 in Palermo, Italy the first senior world championship was played. The first champion was Japan where they beat Mexico 6-0. In 2005 the NFL built on its pursuit in globalization with its American Bowl and NFL Europe. The American Bowl was a series of games during the preseason played around the world to try and introduce the world to American football. From this international series the league had built interest in the sport and created a developmental league, NFL Europe. Although football has tried to establish multiple leagues worldwide they still fail to make football prominent in those countries unlike basketball.

You have grammatical and punctuation issues. Please download Grammerly. It’s free and will help you fix all the issues. Also, where is your thesis statement, points you will cover in the remainder of the paper? You have to clearly hit these in the introduction section. There is nothing about marketing in the intro section.  You are just talking about globalizing the sport itself whereas your title refers to marketing strategies.

NBA Globalization Journey All your titles look the same. Change wording and context.

spaceBasketball started its globalization quest in 1893 by Melvin Rideout when it was introduced in France at the new YMCA building on Paris’s Rue de Trévise which is the oldest original court in the world today. The next year Brazil was introduced to the game as well and became the first country in South America to play basketball. In 1895 Basketball was introduced into China in the cities of Shanghi and Tianjin and two years later it entered Australia. Basketball started to become large in multiple countries but didn’t become a global brand till the NBA started to intervene with the “Dream Team” and touring the stars around the world with the help of sneaker companies. Basketball has become one of the most popular sports with 825 million fans globally and 108 international platers from 42 different countries in its most prominent league the NBA.

This section is way too short. A section is not one paragraph.  Should be atleast a page, if not, sometimes more. Please look at APA papers because I am not sure that you understand the format.

NFL strategies for globalization

The NFL has mixed success on their globalization efforts. In Mexico they have been extremely successful with the most fans internationally according to Statista there are 23.3 million fans with huge drop-offs in the next countries of Brazil at 19.7 million and Canada at 7.21 million. Their success is largely due to the fact of partnerships with popular brands in Mexico such as Bud Light, Sabritas, Pepsi, Movistar and Dodge. The next step that the NFL took was to make deals with cable providers in Mexico with

This is not a draft of your final paper. This was preliminary work that you have done. Moreover, I do not review drafts, I merely give suggestions on assignments I ask for you to turn in to provide guidance.  With that said, I reviewed yours anyway but it seems like you have many issues to work on and a lot of research to do.  Your content and title do not match.